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 Post subject: Poetic Justice
PostPosted: Wed Oct 19, 2011 7:43 pm 
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Dear New Tribes Mission

In this lifetime alas
For your sins you may not have to pay
And as for the next life, I'm not sure
For certainty in that, you took away

When I was a child
Things were black and white
But then came NTM
And wrong became right

My brain was like scrambled egg
And on bad days a little fried
For even as a teenager
It was obvious you had lied

Uncle became a dirty word
Auntie wasn't that flash
For the former let his hands wander
And the latter used the lash

And even when you found out
It was me who had the sin
And I was forced to confess it
From deep deep within

I cried the years you had me
And then for the years I lost
My innocence was not yours to take
But in losing it, I paid the cost

Now it has all come out
The media has joined the feast
You can hide all you like
But you cannot kill the beast

I won't give you the satisfaction
Of ruining what I have left of life
I've taken back control
And removed from my back your bloody knife

I'm past anger and depression
On that score you haven't won
Yes I learned without NTM
Life indeed can be a lot of fun

So when and if you get to your heaven
And you look your god in the face
Remember what you did to us
At that Numonohi place

And if you don't make it to heaven
Ponder this as you sense a burning smell
I, for one won't be joining you
For you've made me serve my time in Hell


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 Post subject: Re: Poetic Justice
PostPosted: Wed Oct 19, 2011 10:19 pm 
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*like* no wait *love*! http://fandaeagles.com/forums/posting.php?mode=reply&f=8&t=858#


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 Post subject: Re: Poetic Justice
PostPosted: Wed Oct 19, 2011 10:21 pm 
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Awesome!!!


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 Post subject: Re: Poetic Justice
PostPosted: Wed Oct 19, 2011 10:23 pm 
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Brilliant, oh that I could write as such. It says it all.


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 Post subject: Re: Poetic Justice
PostPosted: Wed Oct 19, 2011 10:25 pm 
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"And as for the next life, I'm not sure
For certainty in that, you took away"

yes, indeed. the irony.


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 Post subject: Re: Poetic Justice
PostPosted: Thu Oct 20, 2011 11:17 pm 
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"So when and if you get to your heaven
And you look your god in the face
Remember what you did to us
At that Numonohi place

And if you don't make it to heaven
Ponder this as you sense a burning smell
I, for one won't be joining you
For you've made me serve my time in Hell"

And that about sums it up. Can just picture a que of NTMers lined up for an eternal roasting and it dawning on them why! :? !
Any chance I could reprint this, not sure what copywrite laws are regarding posts on the net?


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 Post subject: Re: Poetic Justice
PostPosted: Fri Oct 21, 2011 9:19 pm 
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Any chance I could reprint this, not sure what copywrite laws are regarding posts on the net?[/
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Thanks for asking. No objection to you reprinting this. I write professionally and what happens most times is I get a credit as the writer, but as I'm not writing under my real name (for obvious reasons), just credit it to "Bemused". Just read your last post, brilliant. The world is a better place for Australians 8-)

Oh if you send it to Sanford, feel free to sign it "Aussie", don't think they'll figure out where just South of the Black Stump is. :lol:


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 Post subject: Re: Poetic Justice
PostPosted: Fri Oct 21, 2011 11:37 pm 
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A good chance they will think it's the Stump down at the river at Tambo where kids ran for the cross country race on field day. Or as a turn around point for shorter races. :lol:
It wasn't black then, but maybe there has been a forest fire-----yeah, right, in the desert.


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 Post subject: Re: Poetic Justice
PostPosted: Fri Oct 21, 2011 11:46 pm 
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why don't you post that on MKsafetynet? there is a broad audience there. far reaching.


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 Post subject: Re: Poetic Justice
PostPosted: Mon Oct 24, 2011 10:54 pm 
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[quote][quote="mosquito bite"]A good chance they will think it's the Stump down at the river at Tambo where kids ran for the cross country race on field day. Or as a turn around point for shorter races. :lol:
It wasn't black then, but maybe there has been a forest fire-----yeah, right, in the desert.

Now that you've mentioned desert, they'll be looking for Aussie from Arizona. Yep that's me folks, Aussie from Arizona, got me a nice 10 gallon hat and has me feet up on the old ranch. Oh hang on there's an unmanned drone overhead and its dropping something . . . :lol:


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